October 31, 2005
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My Cinnabon Essay Contest Essay
Mydogischelsea tagged me to write this. While I highly doubt my fuzzy Cinnabon memory is what the marketers are looking for, winner of the contest gets free Cinnabons for an entire year (oh boy–just what I always wanted: Diabetes!!!). So, submitted for Cinnabon’s approval (but more importantly because nothing good is on TV tonight…) is my Cinnabon Essay Contest Essay, describing my most memorable Cinnabon experience ever:
In a suburb far, far away lays a mystical place where capitalism runs rampant, consumer goods tempt even the brokest of hoes, and where cinnamon rolls waft their warm, diabetic-coma inducing love into the olafactories of passersby all. This holy place goes by one name and one name only:
THE MALL.
From swishy-swooshing track-suit clad seventy-something’s out for their morning walk, to multiply pierced and pimpled teens, THE MALL is friend to none, but loved by all.
Pedaling cute cat calendars, lame lava lamps, overpriced compact disks, junk jewelry, and an endless array of trampy, lycra based clothes suitable for underage bar hopping, THE MALL is frequented most regularly by those desperate to purchase its shitty goods (or desperate to get away from their pathetic homes). These consumers, nearly lobotomized by the Muzak that relentlessly permeates the area and disheartened by the horrendous markups on mediocrity, need refuge from the storm; THE MALL understands this. For these tired, weary, huddled masses yearning to break free there is one oasis: THE FOOD COURT.
The FOOD COURT offers the weak caffeine, the fat lipids, and the thin malnourishment. Where else might one indulge in the grotesque dipping of a nacho chip through the thin layer of skin that forms atop aged nacho cheese to lavish in the lugubrious neon yellow creaminess beneath? Where else might one order a Chalupa appetizer and follow up with a Whopper main course? Where else might one find a hot dog crammed so lovingly on a stick? And most importantly, where my fellow Americans, where else but the FOOD COURT may you find a cinnamon roll so large that roll is not even a word big enough to do it justice? A cinnamon roll so gargantuan it must be called a CINNABON?
THE FOOD COURT, ladies and gentleman, THE FOOD COURT.
My love affair with the FOOD COURT has been a long and torrid one that, like any health and sanitation conscious person, never happened. But there was one moment in time when I thought things could be different, when our caloric worldview might be disregarded for the sake of taste and pleasure.
I was seventeen years old and I worked part time at the Hallmark across the hall from the have-a-picture-of-your-ugly-child-put-on-a-mug-or-sweatshirt booth at THE MALL. I would arrive at the Hallmark late, 6:30 pm or so, after having been at school since dawn and after my extracurricular activities ended. I was tired, and most often, unfed.
One dreary evening, after struggling to find a parking spot amidst the Christmas shoppers, I found a snug spot in THE MALL parking lot closest to the food court entrance. I was greeted by a snarling female(?) in a Cinnabon uniform, her(?) face plastered in what must have been a good quarter inch of makeup.
“Sample?” The face asked, smacking her(?) neon green gum loudly. I looked at her, curious as to how she could keep her eyes open under the significant weight of her Tammy Faye inspired mascara.
Just as I was about to lift my hand to her platter to sample a morsel of her sugary goodness, she turned away from me, distracted by a man-child to the left of us wearing a giant, puffy Hornets jacket and multiple gold chains and shouting the following:
“Ho, snap! Da bitch gots da buns!”
“Shut up, Devonte! You stupid,” the Cinnabon peddler countered.
Davonte grabbed the crotch of his pants, which was all the way down by his shins. (Quite the torso, this guy.)
“What you say, bitch? Suck it!”
“You want me fired?”
“Suck it!”
“You want me fired?”
“SUCK IT!”At this point the repetition of the dialogue outweighed whatever merits the players creative costuming might have held for me. It definitely outweighed my desire for a Cinnabon sample.
So you see, it was that night that I was denied my entry into the world of THE FOOD COURT. That night I dusted the Precious Moments and stocked the Cherished Teddies on an empty stomach, wondering all the while if that one morsel of sugary goodness might have been enough to make me feel loved and nourished by the protector that most everyone else knows and loves: THE FOOD COURT.
———————————————————————————–Cinnabons: For or Against? Discuss!
Comments (12)
Lol, so far the two of these I’ve read (your’s and Laura’s) have been brilliant lol. Here’s hoping a few more of the better Xanga writers are able to create such masterpieces.
Jay {Happy Halloween} “Rawr”
Ha! Stop by my site for my take on the Cinnabon experience. I’ll not ruin it for you here by telling you if I’m for or against.
i’d like to think i’m bright enough to figure it out for myself, but i stopped kidding myself a long time ago.
so what exactly is an art therapist?
oh, and although i’m sure the essay won’t win you a load of cinnabons, it certainly should!
See, that story could have gone in a totally different direction if you had told her you’d hold the sample platter. Then, she could have gone off with the 9 year old “man” child and taken care of his cinnabon. That would have been hot, hotter than a cinnabon.
Gross. The mall. I can’t get a Cinnabon anymore unless I’m at the airport. There was one mall in Salt Lake that used to have a Cinnabon stand, but it closed. Eh. I was never a huge fan. Your essay was hilarious.
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Absolutely freaking brilliant! What a great story! Hilarious. I think it’s great that so many people on Xanga whose blogs I adore feel the same way about fast food pasteries. And fast food in general.
I loved that dialogue. You nailed it.
Cinnabons smell just great, but the sorry truth is that once you have more than two or three bites, you feel really awful. Then your stomach feels as if a megaton bomb was dropped inside and you have to spend the rest of the afternoon wishing you hadn’t cinnabon-ed. Sort of like sinning, only way worse.
Lynn
If I’ve ever even eaten a Cinnabon, it was in my wild and crazy high school days… I really can’t remember. However, on principal I have to be against due to the vast quantities of empty calories involved that slide down the throats of unsupervised mallrats all over America. We should be working to combat obesity and heart disease and diabetes rather selling it along with all the other junk at the mall.
Against…definately against! I’m more of a pretzel girl myself.
Oh thanks for the comment.
RYC: Thank you for your comments on my rant about the stupid t-shirts. These women really ought to be ashamed of themselves, but I’m afraid there are so many people in society who are so stupid that they see nothing wrong with it. Someone else commented that they saw a guy in the Only Old People Vote shirt, but the kid must have been harrassed, because he only wore it half the day. That gave me a good laugh.
Lynn
Hey… thanks for your comment the other day about trick-or-treating/my dad/etc. That meant a lot to me.